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Re: Pure Chapter 2
2. The Trouble Begins “Gavin?” Samantha’s voice was weak as she said her friends’ name. She sat up, her blond hair cascading down her back. “Hey, she’s waking up!” Samantha ...
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Re: Pure Chapter 1
1. Sleeping “Samantha Sampson, wake up this instant!” A loud crack filled the room as ruler met desk. The sleeping blonde girl woke up immediately as the teacher glared at ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 3 of Bloody Canvas
Wow, this is REALLY good. From what I see, your grammer and spelling are very good. But don't take that into too much consideration, I'm not that experienced yet. Your ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 3 of Bloody Canvas
Wow, this is REALLY good. From what I see, your grammer and spelling are very good. But don't take that into too much consideration, I'm not that experienced yet. Any ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One of Bloody Canvas
Wow, that was amazing. It has me hungry for more! I think amazing how you have the connection between Chester and Sarah. It makes me wonder if there is going ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One of Bloody Canvas
Wow, that was amazing. It has me hungry for more! I think amazing how you have the connection between Chester and Sarah. It makes me wonder if there is going ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One of Bloody Canvas
Wow, okay I know this is short, but wow! This is really good and has me wanting more! You're really good at writing unlike myself. I'm still just an ameture ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Plain Extraordinary
Well, I saw one spelling error but it's not major. I really like it. Post the next chapter soon!
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Pure Prolouge
Prologue The girl ran through the wet ally. Her white-stained-brown track shoes squelched on the ground as she ran. She looked over her shoulder quickly. The man was still chasing ...
May 13, 2008
